Jake Snow
a romantic mystery, with an erotic twist
Private
detective, Jake Snow, has grown tired of working alone since his sister Bethany
married, and stopped working on field cases with him. He's chosen less
high-powered cases as he decides against teaming with another partner from the
Black Agency. Gradually Jake realizes he wants the kind of love his sister
found, and a different job...
When
he's sent on what he thinks is a simple surveillance assignment, just before
he's due to take his requested extended leave, he finds a tangled web of lies,
and a fashion designer in trouble...
The
question is will he also find love?
HOOK:
1.
The steak restaurant was not far and
Pixie directed Jake. There was a car park around the back and Jake drove at a
crawl into it through the narrow entrance. Pixie put her hand out of the window
and trailed it in the honeysuckle growing in huge clumps as the car went
through the gap. A lovely perfume filled the cab and Jake glanced at her. She
had a leaf between her fingers and she smiled at him.
With the car parked, they walked
slowly across to the restaurant entrance. Jake had his arm around Pixie’s
shoulders and he felt possessive. He liked that this lovely sexy woman was
with him. He wanted her to be his. He bent his head and kissed her cheek. Jake
let go of her shoulders to hold her hand as they went into the steak house, and
were shown to a table by the hostess.
Pixie took off her short jacket and
put it on the chair-back. Jake enjoyed the sight of her body in the clingy,
minimal dress. Sitting opposite each other at a small table designed for a
couple, Pixie gave Jake a look that he found so lovable he pushed his hands
over the table to hold hers. She put her hands in his and smiled.
“Okay, now I want to tell you what
happened at the atelier.
Jake nodded and Pixie began.
HOOK: 18+
2.
They were through the front door and
halfway down the hall before Jake pulled Pixie against him and began to kiss
her hard. He felt her respond to him. She made little husky sounds as she
molded her body against his and kissed him back with a hunger that matched his
own. It sent tingles down his stomach into his cock and he held her tight
against his growing erection.
Jake lifted her up. He kissed her
once softly on the lips and then strode to the bedroom. Pixie kissed his neck
as she held him, but once inside the room as she slid her feet to the floor,
she moved away a little.
She turned to have Jake unzip her
dress and he pushed the skimpy item down so that it fell to the floor. He
turned her. The sight of her in black lace underwear made him yearn to tear it
off and bury his cock deep into her wet pussy. He put his hands around her face
and kissed her slowly, savoring all the pleasure that flooded through him at
the feel of her lips.
He felt her unzipping his jeans and
kissed her harder. He felt her open the buttons of his shirt and he let go of
her face to help her, shrugging the shirt off. She kissed along his chest
muscles, down his stomach, and pulling down his jeans with his shorts
carefully, she moved her face in a soft caress against his lower stomach and
then his cock. It nearly had Jake groaning, so that when she slipped a hand
between his legs to cup his sac and then gripped his cock tightly he did groan.
He put his hands into her hair thrusting his hips gently as she began to suck
him. Her hair slipped between his fingers and he held himself back not wanting
to grind into her lips. The sensation of her sucking was overwhelming. Jake
felt his knees go weak and he whispered to her.
Copyright Elodie Parkes 2013 All rights reserved Traveling Stars Entertainment Publishing
Reviewed by Mamta Madhavan for Readers' Favorite in the free reviews given section. 5 stars
Though the book has some erotic scenes, there is the sub-theme of a private
detective too. The author has managed to interconnect them skillfully and weave
a beautiful romantic story. The descriptions of the scenes, the detailing of
the characters and surroundings make the book very appealing. The erotic scenes
are very tastefully and aesthetically expressed so that the reader will not
find it crude.
The story is very charged and fast paced so that you feel like finishing if
off in one go. It is not a cliched love story. There is suspense, intrigue,
mystery, and romance here. The book gives the reader everything they are
looking for - entertainment.
This sounds like a great story. I love your header for Jake at the top of the page.
ReplyDeleteHi Shelley,
ReplyDeleteThank you for dropping by and the compliment :-)