The My Sexy Saturday brief is for seven words, sentences or paragraphs, but that is so hard to stick to with modern editing. I'm sure you'll forgive me for this estimate excerpt from
Candy Hearts
Serena gazed into his eyes. She saw a little sadness, a
little hope. His light blue eyes were eloquent. She liked that. He was easy to
read. She knew his good looks had attracted her in the first place. He was very
appealing and just her type. Now it seemed to her that he was ideal. He was
intelligent and not afraid to change his life. She was out to get him. She
wanted him. She leaned forward and kissed him.
He responded immediately.
The kiss was delicious.
He slid his hand along her neck and it sent her spiraling
into sexual need.
Serena couldn’t draw back from the kiss and she let go of his
hand to hold his head for more kisses. She enjoyed the melting feeling in the
bottom of her stomach and the rush of wet in her pussy. A throb went through
her clit as Tom traced the tip of his tongue against her lips. Her nipples
reacted, hardening as she opened her mouth and put her tongue to his.
His touch
was gentle on her neck, but left streaks of sensation as he moved his
fingertips away.
“Thank you for coming here tonight.” His voice was husky.
A smile came to her lips as she thought I actually might come right now you’re so sexy.
“I’d love to meet you when you finish work, and have you go
home with me again, or we could go to your place.”
Tom nodded slightly and quickly kissed her again.
“That will be perfect. How about you choose where we go.”
Serena smiled. He was still letting her lead the pace. “We’ll
go to your place.”
The half hour was just about up.
Tom took her hand again and kissed her fingertips.
Copyright Elodie Parkes 2013 Hot Ink Press, Candy Hearts an erotic contemporary short
Very straightforward lass. And there's nothing wrong with that.
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